This is a reference to use while giving feedback. You do not need to address every question nor stay within their confines. It’s a non-exhaustive list that simply serves as a guide!

Questions to ask:

Overall Impression

  • What part of the story captivated you the most?
  • Was there anything you strongly disliked?
  • How would you describe this story to someone else? What was the main theme?
  • Would you recommend this story to others? Why or why not?
  • Did the story evoke any emotions in you?
  • Did the story fit the genre?
  • Was the writing prompt used as an integral part of the story?

Beginning & End

  • Did the story hook you from the beginning?
  • Did you quickly understand who the main character was and where the story was set?
  • Did you find the conclusion satisfying and believable?

Characters & Dialogue

  • Were the characters 3-dimensional? Did they show both flaws and strengths?
  • Were you able to keep track of who was who?
  • Did you find their actions and reactions to be logical/realistic?
  • Did you empathize with their emotions?
  • Did you find the dialogue to be authentic?
  • Who was your most/least favorite character and why?

Plot, Conflict & Pacing

  • Was the plot easy to follow? Were there any parts that left you confused?
  • Were any parts too predictable?
  • Was the conflict clear? Was the protagonist’s problem clear?
  • Did the story maintain your interest throughout?
  • Did it feel too slow in any areas?
  • What was the most exciting moment in the book?

Setting & Worldbuilding

  • Did you find the setting intriguing? Would you have liked to see more of it?
  • Did the details of the world feel naturally introduced or explained? Any info-dumping?
  • Did the chosen words transport you to the time period or world?
  • Were there too many terms created by the writer that left you confused? Were there not enough for the setting and genre?

Writing Craft

  • Was there anything about the writing style that was distracting?
  • Did you think there was more showing than telling?
  • Did you find the style suited the genre?
  • Did the imagery add or subtract to this piece of writing?
  • Was the point of view and tense consistent throughout the story?